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The past two years have been a mess
December 6 marks a painful memory
Three days later...well you know...
My 17th birthday was craziest of all
Sometime later I played problem solver
That was a couple weeks long deal
April 12 was the day from hell
If one more thing would've happened
I wouldn't be here today
Prom day was one of the best days ever
Last day of school was in May
Summer began and got better each day
Every day was blissful and fun
The past was brought up again...
June 10 was a day of contradiction
Left for Florida...3 days later was re-united
Realized how many people were...mostly bad
Broke off a friendship and a relationship
Had an emotional break down...my first
School started and has been going great
She had to leave before her big day...a long and sad day
Graduation is right around the corner now
So scared and happy but it makes me worry
Now I'm thinking about my baby
©2004-2010 ~minimouse
:iconminimouse:

Author's Comments

Alrighty...this is another true life happenings poem. I was just thinking last night about the past two years...cuz there is an anniversary coming up really soon that I am dreading...just like I dreaded it last year...and the years to come...

Any comments welcome...

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:icongreeniceyfire:
...this is random and not really on the poem...but are you in HS...like a seinor???? j/w and I think it turned out good :) and if you need to talk about the "anniversary of dread"....I'm here for yah hun :hug:
:iconminimouse:
yea...I'm a senior in high school...this is a stupid question...but what does j/w mean?! thanks for the comment

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~I hope life isn't one big joke...cuz I don't get it
~Don't let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game
~To fall is NOT to fail...you only fail when you don't try
~The seriousness of an insult rises with the one insulted
:icongreeniceyfire:
hehe Just wondering. And I don't believe in there being a such thing as a stupid question :)
:iconminimouse:
OOhhh...it makes sense now...lol...

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~I hope life isn't one big joke...cuz I don't get it
~Don't let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game
~To fall is NOT to fail...you only fail when you don't try
~The seriousness of an insult rises with the one insulted
:icondonotkilldemons:
You know, if I only change the days it could be about me. Very ggod poem, I like the style, really differs from mine. So peculiar and special are ur lines.

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Morning will come. Just pray you're there to see it.
:iconminimouse:
That's awsome!!! Thanks for the comment and the fave!!!

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~I hope life isn't one big joke...cuz I don't get it
~Don't let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game
~To fall is NOT to fail...you only fail when you don't try
~The seriousness of an insult rises with the one insulted
:icondonotkilldemons:
very welcome! looking forward for ur new art.

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Morning will come. Just pray you're there to see it.
:iconminimouse:
:)

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~I hope life isn't one big joke...cuz I don't get it
~Don't let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game
~To fall is NOT to fail...you only fail when you don't try
~The seriousness of an insult rises with the one insulted

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November 8, 2004
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